Do you like the start of my story ?:)?

Ignoring the spelling and grammar errors it's ok I guess, at least for a first draft that will be changed in the future. I'm not sure what you were trying to accomplish, however, as you begin with what seems to be a 'scary' scene with the curtains flapping and the character lying ramrod straight and unwilling to move. Next thing you know the character is fixing her lunch. If there is a story line in this little bit I can't see it.